என் உயிரில் கனவாய் நீ - story comments!

Aruna2014

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#39
hi friends

i hav uploaded part 19. chinna ud dhaan poda mudinjadhu friends. konjam overall comments sollunga pa plzzzzz.
 
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#40
Story flow ok madam. But wordings stlye inum konjam maathalam. aprm story inum love a feel pana vaikatha mathiri enaku feel iruku. So try to improve way of story writing. Otherwise good. all the best for ur writing career. na sonathelam just suggestions than, if am wrong just ignore plz.
 

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